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Q. Why are you interested in working in a global team environment?

Before

So, um, I think working with people from different backgrounds is interesting, and also I did an internship where I met some foreign colleagues, and I think that experience was good, and also I want to improve my English more, and I think WEST can help with that, and also...

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After

I want to join a global team because I have already seen how much I learn from working across cultural backgrounds. During my internship, I worked with colleagues from different countries, and navigating our different communication styles taught me more than any single task did. I want WEST to give me that experience at a larger scale.

결론(글로벌 팀을 원하는 이유)을 첫 문장에 배치 → 그 결론을 뒷받침하는 인턴 경험 한 가지만 제시 → 접속사로 이어붙이지 않고 문장을 끊어서 전달